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Mar. 29th, 2008 | 08:49 pm
location: room
mood: sadsad
music: news-bambina

title: for you and me (the one who knows)
author: kazuryoshi
pairing: nishikato

summary: this man knows what's going on beween those who's-name-cannot-be-mentioned because he is self proclaimed know-it-all super leader.

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hi! kon kon!

do you know me? i dont think so. you will never, ever know who i really am since i am invisible. which means, i am as good if not nearly good as a well trained ninja when it comes to hiding. even sasuke got jealous of my exceptional talent.

i am here since 7.58 am. too early right. owh, do you know where i am now?

well, i am here, inside the meeting room, under the table and i dont have any idea how i could end up lying here. do you know how?

anyway...from my position i could see his foot, wearing sneakers today huh?. i think i know to whom this pair of red sneakers belong to but better check first.

sniff sniff...hmm, judging from the smell, i think he is R.

owh...somebody's coming.who is he...ow common, just step inside!!!

who he is?!..gosh!this is fun. you have no idea!

hey wait!(i screamed in my mind not out loud) why? he did not come in..instead..hmm, judging from his pace, i'm quite sure he's running away.

Running? as in running away? from who? R? owh..now i get it.

the other guy ran away from R.

.....who could it be?

...

i know who he is!! i am super intelligent! he must be S for no one else in this world would avoid to be alone with R other than him. i know its him.

speaking of these two, i wonder when they will call it quit? i mean, this pretencious i-cant-tolerate-you or you-annoyed-me or its-awkward-to-be-alone-with-you attitude should stop. i know there's some romantic feeling going on between these two though they keep on denying it. hah! i am the know-it-all super leader, there's nothing they can hide from me.

you may wonder since when i 'know' this. okay, this may shock you but to tell you the truth, R fell head to toe with S since the first time he saw him. dont believe me? so why do you think R kept picking on S? huh? HUH?! do you really think his display of affection towards U.H is real? or dont you think he did that in order to make somebody jealous? think again people!! while for S, he was too young to notice that before but i know, he had noticed that now and i am really sure he also felt the same as R.

i know. i just know. at least, that's what i think i know.

owh..R is moving. he's going to go after S. i should..OUCH!!!! damn you R chan, you just hit my pretty face with your stinky shoe, SHIT!! you'll pay for this...later...ops!

sorry, sorry for the harsh word..the usual me is calm,cool and handsome but this is painful. it just came out, the word i mean. sorry.

i should go now. sure, i wont let them see me because it will spoil the fun.

see you later.kon kon.

p/s: dont worry, i'll report the details later. just dont tell anyone about this or R will kill me and YOU too. Off Me GO!!

A/N: this was written in a middle of a failed attempt to save a little kitten. yes people, the kitten died, uwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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from: love_akira
date: Mar. 30th, 2008 03:09 am (UTC)
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Oh ho...so Pi knows huh??? SUnch a know it all leader...
Omg, he sniffs Ryo's shoes haha he has a really good nose..
R and S should come out of the closet really soon..the know it all leader is right
and tsk tsk, his poor face....R's shoes must hit him really hard...
will waiting for more details..

P.S: I feel sad for the kitten...gosh, why did it die?

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from: kazuryoshi
date: Mar. 31st, 2008 09:59 am (UTC)
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yes..they should but then i dont know what else to write so i will let them 'hide' for a little longer..just a little, very little i mean..ah, i dont know.

about the kitty,
i found the kitten lying on the floor, at first i thought its already dead but then i saw it open its mouth like it was trying to breath. so i took it, try to warm it up but it was too late.

thank you for reading :)

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Just a suggestion...

from: anonymous
date: Mar. 30th, 2008 05:50 am (UTC)
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Hi - Thanks for writing and sharing what has been a very promising story so far.
I dont know you, so Im not sure where you're from or if english is your native language. But since you're writing in english, Im assuming that it either is, or you're trying to get better at it.

In any case, it would really help both you and the fic, if you got a beta or proof reader to clean up the grammar. I say this not with the intention of being discouraging, but to tell you that your fic has the potential to be much better. Right now the grammar problems are extremely distracting and it will not help you grow as a writer if it remains unchecked.

Good luck. I really do hope you will keep writing, and get better at it.

Hana

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Re: Just a suggestion...

from: kazuryoshi
date: Mar. 31st, 2008 09:50 am (UTC)
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i am very aware of my grammar issue and thank you for pointing it up. i'll do my best to improve it. thank you :)

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from: haruhi_hikaru
date: Mar. 30th, 2008 06:00 am (UTC)
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Lemme guess..R is Ryo and S is Shige and U.H is Uchi Hiroki~~ \:D/
Hmm..so that's the answer of all the bullying Ryo did to Shige huh... =D

Sorry for ur kitten :'(

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from: kazuryoshi
date: Mar. 31st, 2008 10:01 am (UTC)
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good guess! (its pretty obvious right) hehehe

thank u..about the kitten :)

n thank you for reading :)

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from: kamiyuu
date: Mar. 30th, 2008 07:57 am (UTC)
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LOL Great I love it !!! Yamapi is such a baka xD That' was excellent, I like the way you wrote this fic.

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from: kazuryoshi
date: Mar. 31st, 2008 10:02 am (UTC)
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thank you! hehehehe :D

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from: yum_gums
date: Mar. 30th, 2008 02:01 pm (UTC)
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hahaha...pi the all knowing leader...LOL

wow...uchi was just used to make shige jealous...hahahahaha >__<

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from: kazuryoshi
date: Mar. 31st, 2008 10:04 am (UTC)
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yes..he was just used..R is really mean right?
thank you for your time :)

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